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10-Lucky Strikes

Lucky Strikes

Our classroom in the old building

was carpeted and the only window

was of an upturned slab-shape

easily covered from the big rolls

of colored butcher paper stored

in the dim hallway. Our children came

one day a week from 16 schools, they gifted

our individually-administered oral tests said,

classes small, from 9 to 18 or 19.

We’d turn off the lights and lie on the floor

on our backs listening to Cassette tape

of an old 1940s radio program, “Suspense,”

I think, not my own childhood joy,

“Inner Sanctum” with its horrible creak

of an opening door. The story was called

“Sorry, Wrong Number,” a one-woman show

recorded by Agnes Moorehead. We watched

ourselves turned to terror by sound alone

and our own sensation-deprived brains,

an hour of group-think and bonding.

The old tape, though, began with a ubiquitous

thought-shaping commercial: “Doctors recommend

Lucky Strikes three to one.” The ad appealed

to ladies admiring the sultry puffs on screen

of Joan Crawford or Lauren Bacall.

and to veterans addicted by free cigarette

handouts to combat-facing troops.

Lucky us, though, together,

thinking, wondering …. how far

can just words go.

Carol Hamilton

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